Reflection

Jesus Esteves
Ms. Lopez
WRD 110
23 September 2014

Assignment Reflection

1.  For my formal proposal i decided to do something different than what I've always done. i first decided to look over all my blogs and picked out what information i wanted to use. Once i had that down i decided to find a "problem". Once i figured out what the problem/argument of my proposal was going to be, i came up with my thesis. After i had my thesis down all i did was just connect my main points with the information i had written down and made it into a proposal.
2. Turning my formal proposal into the shark tank presentation was quite simple. i just took the main information from my proposal as well as my argument and briefly talked about them. In my presentation i focused more on a persuasive approach  and the reason why we should make a documentary on this topic.
3. My strength in both the formal proposal and the shark tank presentation was that my argument was clear and I included enough facts on why we should make a documentary on this topic.
4. My biggest weakness in this assignment was that i was a little shaky on my presentation. This could be because I didn't practice that much so i wasn't fully ready. But this is something that i can easily solve for my next assignment by putting more time into practicing.